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Odst by DiZyZ Odst by DiZyZ
my second smudge
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xArtl3ssx Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Digital Artist
Quite like that style of smudging in this piece of work!
Very soft and goes very well with the render itself.
A lightsource would be nice but overall you did a good job! (:
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consumedbyvacuity Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Getting better. I like the way the smudging feels. A few things I would offer as cnc.

It needs a distinct lighting source. Judging by the way the helmet is lit, the light would be coming from the right side. This however might not look too good in the grand scheme of the tag, so I would use the selection tool, cut out the visor, and flip it, so that the lighting could be situated between the top of the gun, and the left side of his head.

This is minor, but in the context you are using the word 'Dishonored', it would simply be used as 'Dishonor'.

Keep it up, mate. This one looks really good, and has some nice, clean smudging.
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DiZyZ Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
thanks alot man for your help
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